Even if writing and art/ambiance felt good, I felt the rythme broke at the point where MC get unconscious while hallucinating at her restauration job. It's like "I've seen X playing trompet, he shouldn't be, so he is from the past and then I finally understood !... - everyone believes me & za !".
EDIT : just realized I skipped a few clues by shoving Connor off:p
How can anybody think that seriosuly without more try/error ? And how could the other friends get on board so fast with the explaination from one person only ?
Though I really appreciated the first part, I felt like the second felt like a rushed thing. Like, we don't get the memo why some are out of the timeloop and some don't. No explication, no pointer, nothing ! :(
BTW I only explored Bridgette's route (good ending/guilt/exodus), maybe there were more explaination/fumbling with other. I'll try them eventually.